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Old 09-27-04, 11:10 PM   #12
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Voted For: hotshh!

RobKilla-ok verse,nothing too special,i feel like some of your stuff couldve been reworded and been better like the screen name line,and the jackson kids line.You had one decent punch-the siamese twins line...funny and good.Your flow was so-so,and your structure leaves something to be desired.
hotshh!-nice battle,better personals and wordplay than rob and better structure by far.You had some pretty dope lines like the bartender line,the perso about mindz kollide,him being fired if his jod was merking,all those we funny and dope.Not very many fillers EXCEPT the clown line...like wtf?
Anyways you won this battle easy with better personals,punches,and wordplay.
Nice verses from both tho.
V/hotshh!
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