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Old 09-27-04, 11:29 PM   #2
streetryda
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aight yo nice drop over all 8/10 i was totally feling it but the on line where you rhymed inches with been-since i wasnt feeling it just kinda seemed like u reworded it just so it would rhyme i liked the oscar line tho..nice drop man elevate and work on some structure cuz you have lines drawn out and some short keep it all together and itll be hot
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