Rar one:::



You cant have Good Audio ~ when you can Barley spit Decent on Text//
See this cats picture? ~ looks like a Cypris Hill reject//
opening pretty dope personal, i looked at his pic, and laughed a little..thought maybe if you reworded it a little different it could of been better..but its straight.



Afraid to think ~ He know's He's next to have His mind perplexd//
Minds vexed ~ ta why you tryd to Sex Elton John by saying you can Flex//
right here is just all filler,useless shit, the setup would of been alot better if your second line was a punch but was just babble..


I understand you Fuck Bitches ~ but come on thats ya Man//
You dont D/R rich men ~just love White Emcees more than Stan//
ok,not bad but sorta played concept



He's Frontin with two loses ~ claimen his styles flawless//
Gaind two black eyes ~ Like Pamela Anderson runnin Bra-less//
cool, made me laugh


Now listen closely, before i blow you away quickly, you mouth could be ill but wouldnt spit sickly//
Couldnt use curse words right ~ if you learn'd from a witch//
again useless material, felt the setup was good,but now with the second shit just becomes all useless shit,could of came better now its not effective


Now listen closely, before i blow you away quickly, you mouth could be ill but wouldnt spit sickly//
Couldnt use curse words right ~ if you learn'd from a witch//
again not feeling this.



Rappin hot? ~ only if you lit fire next to ya vocal cord//
Come on now...take your wack ass back to being a bag boy//
Only time you fuckin cats up ~ when usen an animal sex toy//
ok rhyme scheme off man, umm ending kinda weak,should of came hard here,animal sex toy not bad punch but if worded better would of been hot



biggdz40cal::

I'm CONTAMINATING YOUR HEALTH like HAZZARDOUS WASTE MATERIALS!....
cause when I SPILL FROM MY LID I INFECT YOU like your MOMS VENEREALS!!!....
ok opener,setup was cool, i thought you were going to come harder with the punch line for the second couplet,but man that was really weak..


so bring the YELLOW TAPE for the CRIMESCENE it's a LYRICAL RAPE.....
and from what I seen your GIVIN' UP ASS in every verse that you STATE....
not feeling this at all, filler too me



HOW MANY MISTAKES CAN YOU MAKE??!!WHAT DOES IT TAKE TO BE FAKE??!!!
I wouldn't know and if you show me CUZ I STILL COULDN'T RELATE!!!
no good punch man,this was blahhhh



I GOT BEEF so I serve it and make you SCRAPE YOUR PLATE....
then CUT RAR-ONES with a GINSU til HEs BLEEDING STAKE....
weak shit


this means your body seen the BUTCHER and your HEADS IN A LAKE...
let the CATFISH EAT THAT CRAP cause A MIND'S A TERRIBLE THING TO WASTE.....
umm ok but all useless shit man..all filler


when I SPRAY YOU GET WET MORE than BOTTLES OF MO(moet)...
I'll POP YOUR TOP and watch you DROP like THONGS OF MODELIN' HOES...
booo


I'm a SOLDIER on this FIELD, a 4 STAR GENERAL when BATTLIN'.....
your 92 TECMO BOWL I'm 2003 JOHN MADDEN......
i know where your going with this, but man its all played shit,not hard hitting at all




and you,,..you couldn't SPIT FLAMES if you were a FIRE BREATHIN' DRAGGON....
the ONLY FLAMIN' your doin is being a FLAMIN' ASS FAGGOT!!!!
umm terrible ending shit, not feeling it at all


i have to give this to rar one, i thought came better than biggs verse,with more punches,bigg came with little shit..all elementary shit...wasnt feeling it..and whole verse pretty much filler..