need to improve..................

STRUCTURE - lines are all over tha place.
FLOW - work on ure structure and u'll see how ure flow comes together.
RHYMES - all nice rhymin, but its all basic, get more complex cuz basic rhymin will only get u wins against herbies.
CREATIVITY - punches and personals are all gud and shit, but try sumthin more creative, if u gone diss someone, use metas and shit for it, or links, or wordplay better.

just a few helpful handy tips....................
and dont argue......................

CUZ THE JUDGE & JURY HAVE DECIDED..............AND THEIR DECISION IS FINAL!!!!

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