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Old 09-28-04, 10:21 AM   #1
fluidmoon
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Voted For: INFALLIBLE

infallible~i think you took this one, you had a verse that flowed well from beginning to end, structure was good too,
i liked your opener, it was strong, and set the tone for the drop, and i could feel ya delivery, could almost hear it,,nice drop, i just thought the ending could have been stronger, something more then the BK line, but this was strong enough to win it for you......good job
emerginMc~i just wasn't feelin your vocab, the flow was good, and your structure, but i was bobbin my head to infallibles drop...but good job both
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