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Old 09-28-04, 11:10 AM   #25
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Voted For: Hypnotist

^took this hands down...... he had the harder hittin' punches, yvonne ur structure was better, but flow wise it needed a lot of work on, hypnotist had wordplay and nice metaphors in his bars.. both word usage in the verses coulda been better.. hyp's closer was better and all that was in between- this was very one sided.... my vote hypnotist.. nice battle, both should come harder tho..
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