Voted For: jmsbnd07655

damn......honestly ima give ths one to u dawg....

E...ya shit was kinda funny the way it was structured..first 2 bars looked reuglar...then the next ones were seperated by commas...if u dont see what im sayin then...o well...i wasnt really feelin those punches tho man..damn dat closer was played man...started wit some vocab but still you werent consistant...you still need to elevate...

J....ya shit was nice...i was feelin ya good wrodplay and vocab...BUT....lyrical threats are played now...ya punches were ok...they could be betta tho..ya structure was kinda stretched so work on that...but yea u had a good verse...

overall....you both did ok G coulda did betta tho....but still dont let my opinion stop what yall doin cuz yall do have potential...but somebody gotta get the vote...

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