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Old 09-28-04, 06:18 PM   #13
Hattrick
..."6s"...
 
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damn son, you defintley got this. Ya had the punches, a few good personals, nice metaphors. You were a little lacking in multiples, and the trasistions didnt go so smoothy. Other than that tight verse. Peace
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