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Old 09-28-04, 06:22 PM   #9
Hattrick
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Voted For: teckniquess

HOT SHIT!
Ya verse had everything, nice flow, good structure, mutliples, metaphors, vocab, didnt miss a damn thing. Hot smooth transistions between lines, hot closer and tight opener. All around good.
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