Nice show of potential here-- you included some pretty sick multi flips- the story was dope, you told a pretty dope story and I can see big things from you if you stick with this isht-- Said alot of shit, I like the line -- "bumpin old school wu in my headphones--- and flippin on some m-e-t-h-o-d shit, nice track... (drop feedback on at least 2 songs or phenom will probly close this) .......Work on how many syllables you try to fit into a line, and work a bit on ur pronounciation- 1.

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