A Reflection Of The Past
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this isnt a poem
its more like an open mic
u lacked imagery,vocab,and your piece was way to sure to actually get what this piece delivers....the emotion however was ok,but thats it you jneed to read other poems and see what it takes to write a good piece,i know your new at it but someone has to help you you feel?
no hate man elevate
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Crhyme Sindicate
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