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Old 09-29-04, 12:02 AM   #10
streetryda
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Voted For: cordless

aight man cordless in in my crew
just posting feedback

cordless-aight nice drop in all i liked the flow and style work on not stretching out too many lines tho its bad for structure, nice punches, and you coulda threw some harder personals in there but its aight nice wordplay too

reloaded-ok man u got an okay structure but ur punches were weak and you also rhymed past and last in two sets of lines.that dont look good...your personals lacked but u had more than cordless so thats somethin and just work on some wordplay cuz its looks better also work on structure cuz some lines were stretched too and ya flow wa aight but nice battle

if i wasnt in cordless's crew he'd get my vote

return feedback(either or) our honest votes(reloaded) since cordless is in my crew

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