beat is aight... Kinad weird harpish sound, but it smoothed out. ooooOOOooo nice sample.
OOOOH - you killed the first verse man. ON POINT. Heart felt man. I'm liking the steps this site is taking evolving with depth lyrically and not just battling cats. Second verse a little choppy flow wise, but stuck with the realness. You startin to polish ya flow a bit more. Good looks on being a dad there for ya kid.
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