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Old 07-15-02, 02:32 AM   #10
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HOT....

I LIKED THIS... I ALWAYS TOLD U YA SHIT IS TIGHT..
U KEEP HOLDIN IT DOWN FOR THE POETRY FORUM SHORTY...


"I look down at these razors as they lay against the cold bathroom tiles/
It kinda reminds me of my pain amongst all the happy faces and smiles/
As I slowly pick up one of the blades, thoughts rush to my head/
What would others think, if they knew that I was the reason I was dead?/ "

THAT WAS A STRONG OPENER..
U KEPT IT STRONG THRUOUT THE WHOLE POEM..

NICE

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