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Old 09-29-04, 12:40 PM   #18
~Lady Fiya~
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Voted For: riddlemethat

best lines in the battle:
The gay jokes get you nowhere, but you already there//
Try to elevate ya style before you could with me compare//
(riddlemethat)
^had the harder hittin' punches- dayum, and hands down.... the better metaphors, structure, vocab sumwhat....

poison- u came too gentle, ur structure was terrible very short lines with no lyrical contents of a diss, ur closer needed work on.. u can expect to win a battle without a single punch.. those are some tips, good luck with this battle but i believe riddlemethat won this one..
~wun~
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