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Old 09-29-04, 12:46 PM   #14
Lyriclesolja
I Create Dope Poetry For The Thinkers Of Tomarrow....I Am Lyriclesolja
 
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Voted For: Nutz_B

Aiight here we go......
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Opener-Nutz
Closer-Duke
Punches-Nutz
Personals-Nutz
Metas-Neither
Multies-Nutz
Structure-Nutz
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.Yo this was a weak battle Duke next time fallow the rules 6 to 8 lines whats that like 12? try to come harder next time too i see alot of elevatin both of yall can do.....Nutz not a bad verse but change up your structure it would make it look alot better!.......return the favor wit an unbias vote........V/Nutz
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