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Old 09-29-04, 03:59 PM   #11
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Voted For: 9th Degree

al capone... first of all ur name is AL CAPONE..not AL CAPANE..
ur lines wre stretched cos u was talking only about his name nineth degree..structure was a lil off and so with ya flow..punches didnt hit as hard as dizzel's and ya had no personals....i aint hating yo its just what i saw..dizzel came up with a better flowing and well structured verse which had harder punches..and his lines werent stretched..the lines i liked best were :

Step back dun, I'll kill you quickly, you prolly pre-write ya stuff
Claimin' he's a "tuff thug" to cover up the fact he likes it "ruff"
Tryin' to rep C.S but you know we'll knock your lights out
Only C.S you'll get's a C-Section when you cut from tryouts

^^^ tight...9/10

no hate al capone but kid_p_dizzel gets this..

much luv

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