The Tru Force Of Rap
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ok... theres way to much to exlain what Lil D needs to improve for fuck it.. LiL
you really need work on your rhyme scheme... your bars are way to short, try lengthing them up.. also add more disses/punchs in your verse... after that and vocab, itll become better..
Sunshine, it was decent for a verse.. Metaphors were alright, punchs were good... RHyme was ok.....
vote= sunshine
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