Voted For: Fiya Spitter

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SPuL~your verse had me laughin,i liked the sticks and stones line, and the history line,actually your opener was good too, nice way to start off.. and your flow was on point, some nice punches and personals,this was good, yours was easy to read, your structure was perfect......
DaPoint~your verse was good too, but you had some trouble with the flow of this verse, you should have seperated your pauses and breaks, as well as punches, and corrected your spelling, but you had some good punches too, but this might throw readers off...but nice job both..

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