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Voted For: Most
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most~this was tight, you had good flow, nice, hard punches, and multies, and some great vocabulary, creative disses too, i was feelin this, strong opener, i liked the clothes line your neck and crow bars line,,,great wordplay...
poison~your verse was ok, very simple, but to the point, you could have taken this if you added more words to your lines, maybe a hard punch or two...but decent
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