thank fucking lord... its about damn time there got to be better people on this board..

damn, lol i dont feel like going for a full run down, so instead ill make it simple..

metaphors
Nuclear=7, had some ill ones, but needed a few more
hollow=7.8, came with a few iller ones.. not as playd

punchs
Nuclear=7/8 had alright.. needed some more follow throughs, and directed ones..
Hollow=8 str8 punchs, i thought..

rhyme scheme= tied..

vocab=tied

vote= Hollow bones

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