Dope!! you got lyrcial skill . Change the way's it formatted. What i mean is there's word's from the next line in the previous line...........................................
Eye Of The Storm Cynical Like Children Of Corn
The Day I Was Born A Metal Nucules Was Formed
Chromosmes Imuntites,
Congruently Aligned With My Spine Combined
With A Mind Through Images Invisioning Rhymes
Perception Of Time Is Infinite ,Destructions Imminent
Delivery Is Like An Aids Patient Was Spittin It
Sicker Than Infected Dics In Anal Passages
Rappers Are Faggots Wit Extacy Habits
They Talk Tuff .....But Softer Than Rabbits ..

>>see what I mean ? Not sure if that's a typo or what. But if you fixed that the whole way thru . this will be dope...
keep this shit coming....pz