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Old 09-29-04, 08:50 PM   #23
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This was feedback posted for Lyriclesolja

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Straight forward blatant attacks, very good metaphorical phrase as well.

"i saw your battles those dudes 'choped' you up like 'cattle',
and it seemed like you stiched it up but you still got bitched up,you a 'pussy' i saw those battles you ducked,"

why: lyricalmadness just didn't do it for me, because the rhyme scheme wasn't very creative or rhythm like, didn't really come off as battle like, in a battle i like to hear hard smashmouth lyrics that don't take a long timt to get to the point
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