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Old 09-29-04, 10:26 PM   #18
Wicked One
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Voted For: Fiya Spitter

Spul- your verse was much better i thought ...but dont get my wrong the other dude had an aight verse but yours was better...your punches hit hard too...some were kinda funny...your structure was good very eays to read and everything ...so overall ya got my vote for better verse and punches i thought honest vote...

Da Point- your verse was good too...but your punches were aight but seem just didnt seem to connect or hit hard...your structure was decent but could use a little fixer upper...ya know...overall elevate more kid...

v/Spul...
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