not bad..not bad at all.....all tha peeps who said it had good flow....?WRONG!!! no offense....but i think they don't have tha slightest clue how bout how this written flowed...to be honest it was "choppy" in sum parts.....i couldn't really "grasp" tha concept easily.....keep ya head up n' u'll get better PIZZLE

ohhh....Sis Dun take my Word!!!!