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Old 09-30-04, 12:25 AM   #9
Spektikul
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Voted For: One-Man-Band

Wow, before I say who won what, just wanna say both of you did excellent jobs. Props to ya both, but there can only be one winner unfortunatly...

Opener - Band, I like how you went ack and told us how your whole topical began, very creative
Closer - Tie, both were suspensful, both had classic last lines to the story, wicked!
Metas - Nether, thought one of you woulda used one to desricbe somethin, guess not
Multies - band had some dope multie rhymes in there.
Structure - Emp, wasn't so small, short an simple, therefore easier to read
Vocab - band, he just had more to his verse lyrically than emps
Flow - Emp, I really liked what emp did with his verse, donno what it was but i dug the flow and feel of the whole thing
Staying on topic - Emp, you basically stayed on the topic the whole time, dont get me wrong band, I thought your verse was totally creative, just I think emp actually stayed on the topic a bit better
Creativity - Band, very kool idea with the whole overall storline to your topical

Like I said, no hatem this was a super hard decision for me to make, Empire you did an awsome job but I was feelin One man Bands topical a little bit more, sorry but someones gotta win. Peace boys, and very good jobs!!!