i absoulutly loved this peice... everything was just awesome... the flow was amazin and the words fit together so perfectly... and it just so happens that i am feeling the same way as the juliet in the poem does.... teh imagry was beautiful and the feeling of the poem just was great... i loved it.. fave lines:

As my senses tease me with the sweet smell of my lover I drift.
I've forgotten long days of sorrow, you force my sadness swift.
As if the cool saphire of your eye shines for my entrapture alone.
You walk with dignity into my heart & take your seat upon the thrown.

those lines just flowed and melted together... keep it flowin