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Voted For: Empire
Empire
Nice punches some of them were played and some of them were original some pretty nice multi's and meta's ya wordplay was ehh ok i guess u can up that a lil and ya punches kinda made me laugh so thats a plus ya structure was damn near horrible u gotta fix that pronto
overall i gave ya drop a 7/10
Souless
u had damn near flawless structure but it looked a lil stretched at times u had ok multis and ya personals were ok but ya punches is where u lost this one at it was like u were tryin 2 get them 2 hit but they werent connecting like u were tryin 2 hard try 2 put a lil humor into ya verse
overall 5/10'
this was an ok battle came down 2 overall better punches
no hate jus truth
nuff said
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