thanx for the feedback yall...yeah i know the lines were a lil long but that was the only way i could get it to flow...and the first line was sopposed to begin at "when im just chillin sittin"...but the but when i pasted it the heading or whatever that is got crammed to the first line...ima go edit it now...thanx again for the feedback...much love....1

p.s. sleepers....go ryde a sybian* and get off mine
*(i just learned that word and wanted to use it)lol