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Old 09-30-04, 11:17 AM   #6
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Voted For: Archeologist

Getting pushy.....pm'ing me to hurry up bout sumthing I wasn't informed about*...
Even if you 'punched' me in the 'gut' your 'rhymes' wouldn't make me 'shout'...
ok opener, good wordplay
Like damn I got mag 'clips' that'll injure your 'spits' and fragment your 'hips' with 'punches' that'll soften your 'lips'...
pretty short bar, nice multies tho
Shit looking at your little avatar would be the only way you'd get flashed...
Fuck your 'basic' "punches" couldn't even leave a 'banana bashed'!
Best punch you got, lol, made me laugh, decent personal too
Like...do you choose random peeps off the site and set up a battle hoping they'll accept and get an easy loss?
Like man, I can wipe away 'herbs' like you if I get out my dental floss!!
major stretched, second line pretty poor, but 1st decent punch
I'll 'blow you away' as if I dropped a 'lyrical nuke'...
Like an alcoholic starting to puke...you getting 1 vote would be a fluke!
nice punch, could do with more syllables in 1st line
Called Archeologist, which means you 'dig up rare bones'...
I'll KO U so hard your head'll be left ringing....like ignored telephones!!...
weak closer, but ok personal


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Why's there a battle in Front Lines..You said it yourself..
Tryed to switch your birth certificate..
...........Just to make a name for yourself..
decent opener, nice punch
your on the downhill slope..try's but has nothing but hope..
..this kid's similae to crack Because.. he used to be dope..
Nice punch, good wordplay, kinna good personal i guess
Im batlin a herb, i shud be goin for vets.. its sad to see..
.. You Want an easy win?... then just imagine your me..
lol, nice punch
Your styles antique.. your punches are covered with dust..
Couldnt blow the crowd away..
......... With a turbine fan and a following gust..
lmao, that was a good punch, decent in both lines
Raphael your rare.. maybe even one of a kind..
You Got Owned....ur loss is inevitable.,
...As your names and prediction are already underlined..
good closer, nice punch with decent wordplay

Aiight so, Raphael, your lines were pretty stretched and you need a little work on structure cos some bars were kinna wierd. some ok personals, but not that great punches

Arch, structure wasn't that great eitehr but punches were good, good use of wordplay, that blow the crowd away line won it for me though.

V/ Archeologist
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