This was decent, i havent seen anything from you yet, so i assume this is one of your first poems, good flow, try to fix your spelling a bit and grammar, it would make this more enjoyable to read, cus it sounded like a rhyme verse, like a spit,,,,should be more poem like, lyrically,,,but it wasn't bad...by far..i've seen worse

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