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Ballistik
Ayo....
I slice~through~his~eyes cause I like~to~defy 'n ignite~Rar~One,
This bitch ass emcee's gonna learn that BuLLisTiK's nightmares~stun,
His stupid ass at age 23, born on 1/12/79,
I hack through his vertebrae 'til it bends back; let's let~it~recline,
His facial features 'n his rhyme skills gotta pathetic~design while I raise the roof on this foundation as if I was ta domestically~climb,
Ayo...mah rhymes replenish~divine skills that theoretically~bind,
True skills that make him battlin' me like standin' weaponless on enemy~lines!,
BuLLisTiK eats foes from head ta toes; raw~'n~rare,
Stress comes from battlin' the best; dass why I leave ya with dislodgin'~hair,
Brought up your birthday; now ya gon' need first~aid plus a lot more than common~care,
'N you can keep runnin' ya mouth but sooner or lata, I'ma leave ya jaw~impaired!
So keep fuckin' around...nobody can rescue~ya~ta~family,
I'll leave ya with every virus required ta destroy ya molecula~anatomy!!!!
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Metaphors/Similes:6
Punchlines:5
Multisyllable Rhyming:8
Vocabulary:7
His rhyme scheme was good and his verse hit pretty hard.
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rar one
You aint got hair on your nuts ~ its just ya Balls-Stick//
nigga aint crazy ~ make me mad ill show you ballistik//
Verse's like Pamela Andersons breast ~ ya styles fake//
You Get Baked ?~ Only if your fuckin with Shake//(shake n bake)
Cats a vampire dieing ~ He should know whats at Stake//
upset the way i always call you homo ~Screamen Oh No when i hit him cuz ask'd to give my dick a quick blow//
This nigga thinks he has black roots ~ because after he showershe rinses with charcol//
Typing metaphorical applications ~he's readin gay mags jackin tips on masterbation//
I guess fucking bitchs is one of many of your unfufilled limitations//
Only thing stinking worse then his flows ~ his mothers clit//
This cat needs a dictionary just to find the meaning for it//
{{switch styles}}
i got a design to take over your mind so your ass know's your mine//
lyrics combine and intertwine with gun powder to create a verbal nine//
having your morale decline worse than students at columbine//
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Metaphors/Similes:4
Punchlines:3
Multisyllable Rhyming:4
Vocabulary:3
Your verse was lacking. It wasn't hittin' hard enough. I'll break it down why more if you want. You should be able to look at it and tell why but if ya need more, just ask.
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