Voted For: Mimesis

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mimesis~nice verse here, good personals and hard punches, i liked your opener, nice way to start it off,nice ripped line with his aim name,was a strong punch,as well, good punch with the fresh concepts line,"from the 1970's", nice multies to the end, and your closing line was strong with the link/ personal, i think you take this with overall creativity and vocabulary in this verse.....good job
Eclipsik~your verse was pretty good here, nice flow as well, and vocab was good too, but your punches could have been stronger,but overall decent verse.......good battle both!!




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