Voted For: HoPe

wow~great topical both, nice job
hope~your verse had some great descriptive vocabulary here, nice flow, stayed on topic and i liked how it tied in towards the end, the imagery in your words was great, i could picture this as i was reading it...and it was well set up......great job
jono~you had good flow and some nice vocabulary too, some multies in there and the rhymin was great, but i think hope took this with the imagery and storyline, the topic was captured better, but nice job as well.....




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