this isnt to bad.i just couldnt find your flow with it. Maybe structure need's to be worked on a bit. Some of the line's seemed a bit queer(no diss)...
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Billy Babbs is the Fab-five in drag, this fag cock sucks
And my cock's the crank makin' this fake-n-da-box pop up.
....When i was reading this I thought It mean's your cock's making him pop-up. Just sound's gay to me.Anyway.
This has some nice rhyme's in it. your closing is dope. .It's a good drop . keep them coming.............pz