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Old 09-30-04, 04:17 PM   #27
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Voted For: Mike Hawk

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mike hawk~your opener was good,nice personals on the name, good way to start off,ok, second bar,,,was funny,good L.I. elevation line,nice punch,,3rd bar was ok, then you have the personal about NOK, which was a strong punch, affective here,hence a crew battle,,funny as well, and nice ending lines as well, this was a good verse, you said a lot in a little amount of space, but your punches were hard, your verse was full of them, and your flow never fell off....good job
exclusive~your verse was good,you tried to say a lot, but it messed your structure up,your lines were a little stretched as well, and you had no personals, you mentioned e-style but didnt really use it to be effective against him personally,and your punches lacked against him,but overall good drop,because you did have good vocab, but could have set it up better,.......



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