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Old 09-30-04, 05:30 PM   #2
Ysdat
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deep! i like this sort of reality shit. this is a real issue. You could of got more tech with it and expanded a bit. but you had some allright point's in this. Flow is off in spot's because you stretched the line's. You have some nice rhyme's in it... good drop ...keep elevating..pz
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