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Old 09-30-04, 06:24 PM   #12
Abraxas
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Voted For: Phantom

both were very good and hardshit though both of you jjudgign by both ya battles you didnt try that hard

9th: you had allot of good punches but you had the last line a slef glori which is not good ya had ok strcutre though ya flow was messed up you need to put more effort also you had iight personals some was really funny both some wasnt that direct like that irv gotti thing that wasnt that good..

Phantom: ya verse wasnt that good either it had some ok punches and it was good alsoya structre was good and ya flowed well in most ya verses it was more direct than that 9th though his had better personals

Vote Phantom no hate he had a better verse in my opinion
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