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Old 09-30-04, 06:54 PM   #2
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Voted For: AutoMATIK™

Pretty Sik stuff ya got there, seems like i might hafta challenge u as well but anywayz, rhyme scheme really nice, tha flow was floetic nuttin that i couldn't say out loud without wondering WTF is he/she tryin to say.

Why: automatik seems more complexed metaphorically and the rhyme scheme was like a flurry set blaze up for lights out real nice like, "This Battles Over,Either You In Or You 'Out Son' ...
I Spit illness So I'll Probably Be Too Sick To Remember the 'Out Come'" sik ending like a fatality ya kno
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