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IP:
best lines:
grip your hands together , let us burn sum candles
if we stay together i am sure we can handle
they were affraid to die on the battlefield
our soljaz got used as a human shield
^you always seem to drop very touchin' poems, very very nice, i liked this one a lot.. u put forth emotion and effort in ur poems, which is very good, ur poems seem so down to earth.. keep up ur good work..
pz
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