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Old 09-30-04, 07:50 PM   #15
Parallel
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Voted For: Mimesis

mimesis took this with ease but still a bad verse think it coulda been better and ive also seen better from mimesis heres what i got on this battle:

mimesis:
took it to him strong nice wordplay and multi's took them to him strong but you need some vocab in there dog nic pun ches hella dope to another reason why you win but yer stucture was fucked try fix that and add stucture maybe but i dotn use it eather i know how but who cares.

Eclipsik:
not bad verse maybe 4.1/10 lol, you need everything in yer verse you have weak ass punches no hate but you do man you couldent beat this guy in 3 years lol but atleast you had stucture that one good thing

VOTE: Mimesis

return the favour in my battle verse mike hawk the links in my sig!
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