Thread: Sage in "How to breathe through the disease"
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Old 09-30-04, 08:31 PM   #4
LiL MizZ xO Ai
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this wuz hott, i lyked the rhymes and the shit u put togetha.

Nice Metaphorz, in the 5th and 6th lynez.
I think it needs a little more stucture/ but otha than that its hott!
Nice jOb.
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