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Old 09-30-04, 08:53 PM   #6
Sik Wit It
 
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Voted For: SubtleTee

SublteTee:
Yo punches were hard & they connected..
tha flow was pretty decent & it didnt fall..
and yo strucuture was aight..(try to not stretch yo lines..*use dif. fonts to make it smaller or sum shit*)

40Cal:
Yo punches were good too..could've been a little harder..
Decent structure ur lines wasnt stretched out..
and yo flow was pretty nice too..elevate a little more
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