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Old 09-30-04, 09:01 PM   #28
Plutonium
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Voted For: Empire

Soulless: he had some nice lines, but his rhymes gets stretched towards the end, and the first couple of lines are hard to read because of the flow, there was too many pauses in your verse(the ... ) the last line made me laugh so that was sweet
Empire: you shouldn't explain your verses cause if your punches are good, you shouldn't need to explain it, your first couple of lines was stretched up and down but your structure was solid towards the end, you had some witty punches and nice vocab

Both had some nice lines but empire had the better you yall two......

vote empire
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