Voted For: -..Jono..-

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lyrical~your verse was decent,, your punches were strong here, but work on your spelling and grammar, it would help your flow, but good job
jono~you had nice multies, great flow, nice structure, your vocabulary was strong, and you used original punches that hit hard here,your opener was good, it set the verse up nicely,,and your closing bar was one of the best in this battle,,it was funny
my vote goes to jono for originality and hard punches....but good job both of you



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