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Voted For: bradley_thomas
nice little scheme of rhyming you have there, needs a little more punching ya know, not so much of jabbing but hooks to the head maybe you held back a lil kuz thaz ya boi nut as we all kno we battling so jus let ya lyrics go ya kno, you nice tho.
"i chopped off ur head and rapped it in a rubber band-- then i barried it in the sand" real gra[hic i like that
Why: B-Thomas was jus short and str8 to tha point more direct hits than his counter part LIl man you need to shorten ya battle kuz not everyone is gonna have the patience to read all of that and so u might get snubbed out of a few wins that way ya kno, good luck on yallz future battles especially if ya facin myslef..lmao!!! pece and VOTE ON MY BATTLES AS WELL
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