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Voted For: NewKid
one sided battle:
^^^ya see the text which says who i voted for.
bluntly pust rennegade is wack. well ya had some horrible structure, and ya need to land at least one punch, and ya need vocab, and ya need to get some better multis, ya lines were too short, get some sort of length. but what else are we all on rv for, to elevate. not hate just keep keying.
on the other side we got newkid. definately got a long way to go until ya vet. but ya had wat it takes to beat rennagade for sure. ya had a few good lines, most were decent and others poor, need more comdey in ya rhymes, need some better structure. and some more vocab. ya opener and closure were aight, nothign dope but ya gots my vote. congrats.
it would be appreciated if ya returned the favor, the battle is in my sig...me vrs. wicked one. honest vote please.
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quote your own damn lyrics...
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