the best part a this drop is you used my name twice.But for real this isnt good at all. you need to get off the topic off being harder than the next guy. That topic is played.It is full of simple rhyme's nothing really original everything is simple. My advice get more tech . Use word's that you dont ussually use in your everyday vocabulary. get more tech rhyme's .. your rhyme style is........
man ..
man..
vietnam..
dam..
this is to simple . Keep practising and elevating and you should be allright...............pz