Lyrics were nice......I think you rushed a few lines....flow seemed a little shakey.....just a little. Second verse flowed much better. I think you might have been a little too close to the mic for this one. When you pronounce your Ps.....it kinda clicks or whatever.....anyway. Seemed a little like you rushed it to me, but everyone else seems to like it. Ohhh......just so you know, I got the M16 punch

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