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Old 10-01-04, 05:34 AM   #3
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Voted For: One-Man-Band

Ok honest vote...here it comes...OMB murdered this easily...Empire came pretty plain in this the structure and flow was basic and imagery lacked wordplay was aight i liked the 84-A-6459 line that was good but other than that i wasn't feelin it you have come better in the past but it looked like u didn't try in this battle.

OMB nice verse well layed out flowed well and structure went funny in places but the wordplay and imagery killed ur opponent fav lines included

“yeah word.. after the shit that happened to my LOYAL bros, it hurt to pass the aftermath, n bodies..”
“I know how ya feel.. wasn’t gonna tell ya… but… im Simms.. the cat they asked to grab the shotty”

&

He turned, looked me in the eyes… then sprinted off like the word “family” was nothing
I was like shit.. Alone in this house, men from both clicks dead, feelin played n abused
We was erased as a crew.. n im fucked.. hearin sirens, but im shocked here betrayed n confused

/\ dope bar

But Empire u needed to step up and ya didn't sorry dawg vote OMB
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